All Comments on 'The Sex Shop'

very nicely written . wish you had described your skirt would have been exciting for male readers

Very very good fun to read, your characters are well visualised (which isn't suprising if one of them is you...) even if the situation is a little outre, it's still a great story.

Think the suggested order is a good plan...

Kalinrith

Really well done. I think I like this one best of all that your wrote.

I think I'm going to read them all in the order you suggest.

Great stuff, well done

Will's