by TConcord18
Special award for most original story ever. I now have to search to see if such a thing really exists.
Thank you all for the positive feedback! Ch 2 is waiting on approval. I hope you all like how Rob will be getting deeper into the league
Excellent, really well done. Good blend of hot sex with physical contest. The english is a little stiff at times, verb tenses don't always agree. But other than editing, top marks!! 5 stars.
I enjoy stories that have substance, something that gets ones imagination going, so I am very much enjoyed this initial story and I'm looking forward to reading the other 6.