by FamilyIssues
Wouldn't this work better in the Humor and Satire category?
Only can give a 1, because Lit lacks a 0/5 score.
Please, just stop writing.
this story had a tiny sliver of hope when you intoduced conflict with the saleslady. you of course found a way to disregard the only draw in and ruin your only attempt at astory. please save yourself the trouble and don't bother posting these terrible wastes of time. worst story I have ever read on or off literotica.
I liked it, but I think you were too repetitive about how hot she was. I think we got it. She's gorgeous. I also agree that some development with the sales clerk would have been intriguing.
hot story but the scrawny dyke sales clerk was a turn off, just ugh! at least Sam has a big dick but that bitch wasnt even curvy, gross. And if he wanted her to stay in the apartment why bother with the new outfits?