All Comments on 'The Shard's Favor Ch. 001'

This was great!

When is the fourth chapter of the escape room series coming out?

Very interesting premise. I like the way you kept bouncing up against the unknown in the story. Please keep it up.

Grabbed me from the first sentence & never let go. Unfortunately much too short.

Thank you so much!

I'm going to be completely honest. I haven't checked this site since this story went live cause I was worried that the novelty of the premise wouldn't resonate with you guys.

I'm so so happy that you took the time to tell me you enjoyed it. Truly.

Hey! I'm glad you've liked the Escape Room so far! I gave the 4th chapter to my Patreon patrons a bit ago and wanted them to have the opportunity to enjoy it first before anyone else got to see it.

I'm submitting "Room 4 - Hannah" to Literotica today, which means it will likely show up sometime over this weekend. If you don't want to wait, then it's available on my patreon —https://www.patreon.com/jcbeleren — or you can send me an email and I'll personally send you over a PDF.

Thank you so much for following the series and for your patience.

Good writing, keep it going!

This one is great! This feels like the beginning of what could be the framework for a much longer story or even (hopefully?) a universe. I really hope this goes much further than your other stories.

Please keep it up!

FANTASTIC

Hi

dependign on you this coudl be 100's of chapters long. it feel lieka proer book's first proloage chapter. but that dependso n wher you want ot take it.

great read no matter hwat.

Both make and female characters feel real, thank you.

Si...more of this ine

How much longer do I have to wait!!!

Hi, I would love to read the rest. I couldn't find the story on royalroad. Will you post more of it here?

Awesomely delicious story!

Hey, it's been over a year since you posted this, you said part two would only be a few DAYS!! Hehe. Fortunately I just found you, so I haven't been waiting long, lol. I was really hoping it was one of those stories where the author puts a chapter number on it but it is actually a complete story, lol.

Appreciate you sharing your stories though, off to read another! :)

Like the way it went but esp. the way he was lead to the conclusion he wanted everyone to know his name.

But what ever happened next? I don’t see any other chapters. Was the story never completed or was it removed?

It made my day. Thanks for spending your time and energy making up stories to entertain those of us who wish we were half as talented.

Where is Chapter 2! You PROMISED. Had I known you'd renig, I'd have given you 2 stars for the incomplete story.

Please, please, please finish this!!!

I like it. But it needs to be finished 😪

Loved it!

Appeared to be a great start to an interesting series but sadly seems just a forgotten fragment of a story, too bad. Otherwise a well thought out and written chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.