All Comments on 'The Shieldmaidens Lover Pt. 04'

YEA BEAT THAT! I am the first one to leave a response! HAHAHHA

......oh and Great chapter by the way! For a moment I thought the poison would kill her, or make her turn against lover boy from magic. DONT mess up my lovebirds! They have to stay together! Understand?! Good! :) hahhaha i'm playing around.

But really it was a great chapter, I can't wait for the next.

I just started reading the story, and am really enjoying it. Very good writing!

Now THAT is how one writes a fight scene! Brilliant.

a quiver with several hundred arrows. Seems unlikely to me.

That's why it's in the Fantasy section. Don't be a whiner

"For our Lady men!"

Well what a letdown. A great and detailed story, however the ending was a quick “ and they all lived happily ever after”

Don’t bother with this one.