All Comments on 'The Shoe Sales Girl'

Yes, I know that 38 is more than twice 18. I'm glad that that is the only negative in the story, but for people to not like the story because of the math is rediculous. RELAX people.

When I started the story, they were 36 and 19, then for some reason I changed thier ages, and did not reread the sentence.

my applogies to those "perfect" people out there that just can't simple get by that sentence.

If you are going to comment on the story, please forget about the math. Do you enjoy the story? What would you like to have happened? etc...

maxxmann81

You are quite the talented author! you have a smooth way of writing which I am a bit too tired at the momonet to comment on.

Hoteset story I have read so far.

exhibitionism, and women without panties