All Comments on 'The Shop on the Corner Ch. 07'

by kimuk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sorry

Sorry for the lack of gramma , they are written for a certain parson and he dosent check my gramma, just enjoys them

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
thrilling.

mmmmm, love this story! Your would benefit from some editing though! Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please Edit!

I love this story but you really need to get your "he, she, her and him" usage corrected!

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