All Comments on 'The Short Skirt Ch. 01'

This kind of story is not usually my thing at all, but your writing is really impeccable, and I think you deserve to hear that. Nice and smooth. Yum. :)

it is a wonderful story with lots of possibilities about the way it can turn out I await the next couple of chapters.

Great story, it flowed very well and the characters are starting to develop nicely.

I hope chapter 2 we be posted shortly

M

Very interesting writing style. Smooth story flow. Enjoyed it very much.and it held my interest. Look forward to more chapters.

4 Stars.

Definitely worth continuing. You've got a good style that's easy to read, and I really like the pace you're setting. Slow and steady, with just enough psychology to make things interesting.

I'm very curious to see where things go from here. Are the staff trying to turn her into a stripper? Cybercasts in her future? Prostitution? Willing enslavement? There are a lot of possibilities.....

Not my kind of story really well written. It does seem a bit unreal but I guess its fiction.

Are people really so stupid and gullible? This girl needs to call the police. Well written but not my kind of story

The comment from Anonymous that asked why she didn't call the Police ? Er, because this is fiction and not real life. Get a grip please !

I'm looking forward to chapter 2 ! This is a good story.

That, was uncomfortable... and not in a good way.