All Comments on 'The Shortcut'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot.

So very hot, thank you. Particularly liked the description of her being fucked in her ripped tights. Great story, especially for a first contribution. Look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Yum!

Beautiful description, and perfectly graphic. This is what i like to read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I want more.

Please write and submit more. I love your style and your detail. I’d love to read more. Thank you for this story.

tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
A LATE NITE WALK HOME IN THE GHETTO

with all the trials of the neighborhood TK U MLJ LV NV

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