All Comments on 'The Shower'

Well done, C&R! Looks great. Thanks for the acknowledgement & keeping our modifications in the final cut. We want a similar shower now off our back porch. Lol! Looking forward to more creative work from you.

Loved the build up, how his mind worked. Wanted to be her...

I enjoy the picture you set, the little details that make it so Erotic...!

Good story...! bet it was just as exciting writing the story , it is for me ..!

I used to take a pad to the nude beach and write naked next to my lover, writing one page each , continuing the story..! its another great way to explore each others minds, whilst feeling horny in the sun naked.

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