All Comments on 'The Shower and the Seduction'
by sixdayssouth
- 33 Comments
Anonymousabout 18 years agoLoved it. Please make sure and finish it soon. Don't leave us waiting for months on end to see how it ends.
Anonymousabout 18 years agohe hard and she half naked,but no fucking.teasing writers suck.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoblizzard+son+mom=been there read that
by the way, waste is what one throws away. waist is the area above one's hips
Anonymousabout 18 years agoGood start. I hope this story can last as long as it takes for 10 feet of snow to melt. In other words, I'd like to see more than 2 chapters.
nightwyngabout 18 years agoDo give us the next part/s! And oh, piss on the comments from those here who have no IMAGINATION! God, this placed is filled with their like!
Night~
Anonymousabout 18 years agofuck the naysayers!!!! please give us more of this hot story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousabout 18 years ago99% of a storys life is in the build up. Well done. To all those narrow minded likes out there that whinge because there wasnt any, "and i guided my massive cock in her waiting mound". You need a reality check. You dont just bump into someone and bang them. Theres always a chase leading up to it which makes for 99% of the fun.
Top story. And even if the whole blizard thing isnt new who cares you did it well!!
Anonymousabout 18 years agoexcellant story, would love to read more, the best stories don't have to have all the porn.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoWhat a great story with hot, erotic build up. Please keep it going.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoYou are not the only writer on this site that doesn't know the difference between waste [ that is your shit } and waist {that is your middle}
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI loved it. The seduction is the most important part of arousal. Waiting to read the next chapter.
Thanks.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoBoth this story and your other submission are fantastic. Looking forward to more of your stuff.
airfoilalmost 17 years agoCome now, don't torment us any further...please be quick with part 2!
Anonymousover 13 years agovery sexy story could not help jacking off as i read it.
ready for part 2 and i'm getting hard agaan
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThat's typical of many boys, they're embarrassed if their mother sees the big stiff prick they're sporting between their legs, but at the same time they'd love to show it to her. "Show it hard for mom," is what boys often jokingly say to each other. It's natural young male exhibitionism that this talented writer in his early 20s has captured. A boy wants his mother to see that he's all grown up now, with a big fat prick and a pair of heavy loaded balls, maybe even let mom know that what he's got between his legs can do her a world of good. The boy's got lots of creamy semen in those young balls of his, and maybe in the back of his mind he's thinking that it all belongs up his own mother's cunt.
holyweirdo87almost 9 years agoNICE build up and a hot steamy ending! waiting for more.
PS: Please replace "waste" with "waist" throughout the story. Kind of a turn off, that one. Otherwise a hot read!
