All Comments on 'The Shrinking Machine Ch. 04d'

Loved it! Great work. Please continue!

Same anon, again. Couldn't have asked for a better end to this arc. Great twist with Vanessa's choice! And a cliffhanger at the end on top of it all! Can't wait for more!

Loved the addition. Hoping the hacking doesn't affect any of them and someone new realizes they shouldn't have mess with Rachael.

Please don't forget about this story! You have fans! :)

One of my favorites on the site! Moar please!

You can't leave us on a cliffhanger! New chapter soon? Please? :)

Fantastic device enables all sorts of sub stories. I know this is a reach, but my ultimate suggestion would be the addition of a depowered Linda Danvers aka Kara Zorel

Are you ever going to write more? It has been ages!

Hello all -

I still intend to finish out this story, and have finished Chapter 5 (in two parts). The next story arc is likely to run longer than the entire story up until this point - and given my long history of very sporadic updates, I would prefer in this case to release the remaining chapters only when the whole rest of the story is done. That may be quite some time.

If you don't want to wait, or would like to help and provide feedback on the next chapters and the outline for what hasn't been written yet, feel free to email me at adrammalech5580@gmail.com.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was engaging and very well written. Character development was excellent too.

I really REALLY hope it will continue soon. That cliffhanger left me very very worried about the girls!

I hope you would continue this series! Very very hot. 5 stars!

I hope that you doing good still, been so long since the last update, I hope one day to see the rest of this story, but if not I still enjoyed what we got

Hard to believe I found this story 7 years ago lol, I still check back in every few months or so to see if there is an update, maybe one day