All Comments on 'The Shy Boy'

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ShyDenZenShyDenZenalmost 8 years ago
One of the best shorts I've ever read

Hands down- great scenario. I loved the torment that religion helped cause for our protagonist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sigh

All that buildup and you made 50 minutes pass from one sentence to another, AND then when he finally gave in, you didnt even make them have s with him, which was their whole motivation.

3.5\5 buildup, 2\5 overall story, apply yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

You can be much better than this, you know

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