All Comments on 'The Sibling Code Ch. 02'

Damn I don't know where to start the praise, this chapter was such a great upgrade of the first it almost left me speechless. There were so many ups and downs, all in a good way, I was afraid that the bro/sis relationship is going to suffer, or that Crystal will be jealous or over possessive towards her GF, but in the end they came up to some sore of agreement that makes it work for all three of them. Sure it's in early stages and mostly in individual heads but the foundation is established and now it can only grow and flourish from there.

The hippies were a strange addition tot he story and for one I'm glad to see them gone fast, the chick might come back for some future fun but that can wait. Also glad to see the MC taking the initiative when presented on a silver platter, might even have the balls to keep with the girl in the long run.

5* easily!

Absolutely great! Loved it just like the first part.Nicely paced from the first part and progressed to this part. now to wait for part 3 and 4.

Keep it up

Absolutely agree---- need more. This was awesome

Now I'm gonna go read the rest of your stories

But I enjoyed this.

When I worked in a garage a lifetime ago, the mechanic's policy was to change both hoses; if one was bad, it was likely the other was bad and ready to leak soon.

5*

A really great story. Thank you and keep it up for many more chapters

Looking forward to the next installment... Keep it up..

It's great to get feedback on a story. Nice to know people enjoy your efforts!

I am a visual reader, so I appreciate your descriptive style of writing as it makes it very easy for me to see the action. I also like your dialog segments, they are very natural. I have a fondness for Irish girls so I'm looking forward to your next chapter to see what adventures the trio has with Trish.

Thanks for the awesome reads and keep up the great work.

I just had to let you know how much I've enjoyed reading your story. It kept me interested and engaged throughout it's entirety, and was visual enough for me to be caught up in the whole storyline. Thank you, and can't wait to continue!

Loved both of the stories… Hurry the hell up with chapter 3 Jarhead…

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Come on already. Waiting for another chapter is pure torcher.

You can't just leave the story there. Get cracking and give me some more chapters. This is a great story. Very visually descriptive, sensual and deliciously filthy.

Crap. Like I said before getting her involved is just going to ruin everything between the siblings. I know been there done that if it don't then they are really screwed up

Somehow I always find these amazing stories way to late and I just need another chapter soon.

even though the story is very good it appears that you are rushing to complete the chapters. This one had more editing mishaps than any of the previous. At one point you had the girls wrong in the dialog. You are not close to losing a 5* level but please take a little more time to have someone proofread before publishing. Thanks for writing and sharing.

AWESOME

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Good premise continues.

But it's almost all side story, not sexual activity.

Four stars.

This continues to be well prepared and written, the premise still holds and the erotic activity is ramping up.