All Comments on 'The Silver Porche'

by Zeff999

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
great start

need some follow up stories, some original ideas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Your title is misspelled.

Not a great way to start!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good Story

I must admit that the mis-spelling of Porsche in the title almost put me off, but I'm pleased it didn't. A good short story which needs a follow-up. We need to see some more action from Sally. Well done.

DesiremakesmeweakDesiremakesmeweakalmost 6 years ago
Nice idea

Yeah I liked that.

Zeff999Zeff999almost 6 years agoAuthor
Misspelt Car title!!!!!

Thanks for reading the story. I misspelt the name of the car because I was worried about legal stuff as it was a porn story. The great German car company might not like their beloved chariot being used for fornication?

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