All Comments on 'The Sins of the Fathers Ch. 07'

by Fatherlyneed

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charliebillcharliebillalmost 8 years ago
No real comclusion!

You left all of us hanging. You need to finish this story with well described full on complete sexual intercourse. Well written, but I believe a lot of folks are going to agree with me!!

KarenBethKarenBethalmost 8 years ago
is that it?

It feels like there should be more. I've loved it so far, but give us some more, or give us some closure. Pretty please? ;)

izzieDizzieDalmost 8 years ago
Disgusted!!!

WHYYYY OH WHY can't ppl KEEP their mouths shut!! Must they blab EVERYthing!!?!

Jeeeez!!

Dad you should've been *harder* in stipulations of shushing it or nothings getting!!

I can see this going foul with Mac getting in on the action.. smh... !!!

Maaaaaan!!

As good as this *tale* is, it gonna kill me to see that!

OAN: Puns intended on all counts!

<joker grin >

Izzie

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 7 years ago
A pendulum

Swings both ways; This story is going down hill now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MORE

WHERE IS PAGE 5 +++++++

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

I know it's at least 4 years since you wrote this but this has to be

One of the most dramatic and erotic stories on this site, I reiterate what I said before

you need to return. Your public awaits.

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