All Comments on 'The Sins of the Fathers Ch. 14'

I remember you saying this chapter would be posted in a different classification. In any case I will be here for the next thirteen or so chapters. Your detail of each experience is quite exquisite.

Makes me wish I could find a woman like Jess - even though she'd probably fuck me to death! What a way to go!

Still not thrilled with the girl on girl action - does nothing for me and ruins that part of the story for me.

You're getting better and better can't see what's next for Jack

good. story? None

This chapter is so different from the others. As a writer you seen to let yourself go abit.

In a really good way, your style of addressing the sex between Jack and Jess as more sensual, rather than as sex or as lust

Why are you changing the story line to include others? sssshhh

5'4 and 95 lbs.?!?! Makes her BMI 16.7=Severely Underweight!! Just Jess would need to gain 15-20 lbs to be considered the lowest weight possible and still be in the healthy weight range. Love the story but geez, a little research... Concentration camp/anorexia anyone?

The hottest thing I've read in my life.

Yes

…didn’t sit right for me, at least not as good as previous chapters, but imma stick at it. I think my heart is set on dd:lg all the way. I like the forbidden nature of it more than anything. This was ok though x