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Anonymousover 6 years agoReally fucked. Just made me hate mom and sam more than i already did. Good story telling horrible story that is more unreasonable than the current President
Anonymousover 7 years agoHave loved the story so far...this chapter, not so much. I mean really?! This first visit with estranged Mom, who abandons her at 14 because she is so fucked up about her own incestuous dad. Participates in a threesome fisting her daughter. After the ritual burning of the book of horrors?! Ugh.
Prolonged_Debut10over 7 years agoYou are making the fatal mistake once again, you are forgetting about the story line. You didn't move 1 inch forward In this chapter, You moved four steps sideways, and two steps back. You have taken a sweet innocent girl and turned her into a highly sexualized character in the course of two liaisons. I'm not sure, but I don't believe in the history of all writing, I have ever seen it happen. It didn't even happen in that piece of trash called, "50 Shades of Gray," and that person got paid for writing that novel. You say your story is at a turning point, If it is, I hope it is back to include, McKenzie, Jack, Spencer, and most importantly, the story. Every story has a beginning,, middle, and an end. I've seen the beginning, there has been no middle to speak of, except for the sex, which is done nothing, but throw the characters to the 4 winds, and now I'll wait to see where you take it from here. Good luck, and I mean it.
Anonymousover 7 years agoHonestly this is THE best series I have ever read anywhere. Everytime I see the next chapter I know it's going to be great and I'm never disappointed. Thank you for keeping me entertained!
