All Comments on 'The Sister'

What a bunch or worthless rambling with no point... a waste of time to read...

points for the japanese sword.

points lost for rambling pointless-nes.

if you are going to do a multi-part story, tell us.

Too much rambling and not enough meaningful action in this story.

Dialog and description is very, very good, but yeah, where's the sex?

He's allowed to ramble - he was wasted, the rambling is a good reflection of his thought processes at the time.

So what's next? Ivy has "found someone", obviously him. What is her reaction to him nearly killing Ronnie? Is she scared of him now or is he her "White Knight" for rescuing her? Can't wait for next chapter

Enjoyed the story very much...rambling but real...good set up for a next chapter which I surely hope that you are planning...otherwise, leaves you hanging with little or no purpose.

please write more. i liked it. i want to know what happened and whats going to happen.

Best friend’s younger sister is one of the original stereotypes for a reason: it works!