by SinisterMedows
I enjoyed the story. Your idea was clearly expressed and you tied everything together your development as a writer is getting better. I hope you have an even better chapter 06-07 with more sex.
Thank you for the your criticism bokhun8614. More sex you say? Why my dear if that's what you crave so it shall be. I usually listen to what my readers have to say and incorporate their ideas into it, may it be one or two chapters at a time. I just can't wait to post the next two chapters! It's already finished I just like to wait and see if anyone has any ideas they'd like to share with me. Only you the readers can make me a stronger writer :)
I would love to see Alexandra's Penis growing so much bigger than it already is and I would also love to see Alexandra getting raped again.
I would love to see Alexandra's penis getting urethral sounding.