All Comments on 'The Slave Diaries-Swinger's Party'

by shygirlwhore

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Yikes

This was painful to read.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 6 years ago
There's an unfortunate element here.

The double-meaning of the word SLAVE.

In a story written by a black author?

The visit was "normal" for the environment...

In the context, the racial meaning was distracting, not actually relevant.

I recommend finding a way to not use the word?

Synonyms? Made-up word, even cute--but we readers understand the meaning?

The freedom in the environment, and the honesty of "your" reportage

are appealing. Send me an invite, please? :+))

But minus that particular other-meaning word, please.

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

God, what absolute rubbish.

Moving on

1/5

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