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All Comments on 'The Slave Master'

by perv7234

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Well written, but it feels like two stories mixed together. Or is it all to be explained in further episodes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A mess

You had a good idea, but you executed it poorly!

C_frommnC_frommnabout 6 years ago
So

Where is Chapter 2 . and how does he get Ruby away from a Mobster w/o bring everyone down on him. and How does Slave 1 take to the New Girl.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I'm confused with the storyline. Keep going and tie it all together

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