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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting start and I'm looking forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You hooked me quickly with this one. Now just waiting to be reeled in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dashiell Hammett, Harry Dresden and I are waiting for the next chapter. Please tell me there will be an M1911 pistol involved. Outstanding intro. Thanks.

Prof_MasterProf_Masterover 1 year ago

I give this a 5, despite little action, because of the fine writing. Plus, unlike some, I enjoy buildup. The premise is enticing. Moving on to 2...

Skater6762Skater6762over 1 year ago

I rea,log hope this turns out to be a horny Dresden Files. This is gonna be so good!

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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