All Comments on 'The Sleeping Princess'

Great first story! Please continue :)

GREAT beginning to your story!! I liked the background on your character, Sir Jamie. Now, we need some background on the princess. I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

great way to wake her up

I was a little apprehensive when I read the description, but when the wicked grin crossed his face I knew this would be a good one. An excellent story. I'll have to keep an eye out for your name in the future.

A really good read, I just wish you would have had him screw her while she slept too lol ;)

I'm considering continuing this story line, so having the prince do her in her sleep wouldn't have worked out. She'd have noticed THAT as soon as she woke up, and wouldn't have liked that at all. Now I can have him deflower her in another unique fashion, but don't worry, a little birdie told me this princess is a heavy sleeper, so you may get your wish yet!

I wrote a second chapter, detailing what Sir Jamie had to go through to get to the Princess, and also, her deflowering!

Kind of swooned over his description... and then deeds ;P