All Comments on 'The Sleepwalker'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
awesome

this needs to continue not as good as slut mommie

but could be a close second

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 11 years ago
5 Stars - easy!

Really excellent story - well written and fucking horny. Room for a sequel though.

steventhegreatsteventhegreatalmost 11 years ago
Unrealistic

The size of his dick was ridiculous, and the speed that his revulsion left after a lifetime of hatred is also absurd...you need to work on that, but overall an ok story

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
A good story

There was one thing that confussed me a bit though and that was Sue. Sue Trevor's wife, and Sue Jon's bride. Might have been a bit too much naming both women Sue.

I take it that the Sue he fucked in the washroom when cleaning her skirt was Trevor's wife and Sue the one after the party was Jon's new bride.

I don't think either one of them were described as to what they looked like.

Anyway; I'd like to see Josh get both Sue Jon's wife and Sue Trevor's wife pregnant,

Still a hot read. Thanks for sharing

richbwrichbwalmost 10 years ago
nice

great start to this story keep it going turn mom slut off and be with son fulltime shes hot

peebudypeebudyalmost 10 years ago
nice

saw that you just posted chapter 2 so I had to read this to get up to speed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
how do u spell GARBAGE

Pure Garbage

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This is rape

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