All Comments on 'The Slut'

This is the best story I have ever read on this site, and I have read many!

The storyline wasn't too bad, tho a little bit unbelievable. Sentance structure, punctuation and consistant tense could use some work. You may wish to try a volunteer editor next time to double check for those errors.

This might be the best of the Little Miss Blair stories. The buildup in The Slut is perfect and I love the kinkiness. Keep on writing!

As always you are the best rivalled only by Jane Park (whose submissions seem to have disappeared from the net)

Wow,wow! More 4 the Slut also, the Slut~2 !!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE a follow up on this epic journey into sluttish submission

I hated Beverly's character so much that I couldn't even finish reading the story.

hi just to say what a good story you started hope there`s more to come keep up the good work

please wright some more great storysXOXOXOXOX yourway

Pete

I wish I had a girlfriend that would turn me into a lezzie slut like that... Oh,fuuucckk that was yummy hot. Time to finger my slick, wet pussy....

part 2....overdue !

An amazing wakening and a journey of lust and debauchery. Beautifully written and so descriptive...

This was the best stories i ever read is there going to be part 2 of this storie

part 2 ?

We need chapter 2! Would love if one of the you school girls dominated her as well

This is a fine sexy story, with plenty of juicy lesbian scenes. I stayed hard during the whole read, but the strange thing is those white socks rubbed on her lips and into her mouth was the hottest part of the story...Go figure.

Love this story Julie's transformation so sexy, beautiful descriptive writing, for me the Julie's feet and sock fetish are a bonus.

I would love to read part 2, what happens back home or even the trip home at that filthy gas station, is Julie still wearing those dirty cum soaked panties, I really want to hear about her under that desk licking the girl's feet and other things I assume, great story, thank you.

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