All Comments on 'The Slut Procedure Ch. 01'

Interesting premise. You have the mechanics of sex down, but not the emotional component. Too bad.

I little more si/fi then I really like but a good story so far

I love the combination of kidnapping and mind control here. I think that sticking a USB stick into her nervous system was a very creative way of reprogramming her, and the occasional cutaways to the detectives and Edward himself provided nice breaks between sex scenes, and helped keep things in context.

The Three Ring Circus

Deeper-Down presents the anatomy of a kidnapping through several different voices: the victim, the mad scientist who is going to alter her body and put her up for auction, the criminal mastermind who keeps the police pursuit landing flat - footed at every turn, the private security which has penetrated the criminal organization, but only to find they've been fed with dis - information. The story is fast paced, well told.

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