All Comments on 'The Slutty Daughter Ch. 01'

bring on the next part, its nice

The story was made longer by adding all the "word -- word," and use of "..." not by actual story. Try again as this version is junk.

loved it bring on more

I never read the first story but if ths is longer why didn't you finish it? It just sounds stupid without an ending or at least adding more to it, like going into the house and him fucking her tits giving her some fresh cum on her face.

I've never read the original story, but I hope you decide to keep expanding on it.

other version ...... skimmed over extremely quickly .............. no matter

what people actually say - this version millions times better than other version

Still to short, for the next load of acne remedy could have been sucked out.

Maybe she had to make daddy ready to shoot by putting it in her pussy.

Giving her injections of it 2 or 3 times a day.

The new cure for acne.

Would have preferred a longer story; think it could be develed further still. Please do.

I gave 5 stars, had really good laugh, thank you!