All Comments on 'The Smell of Her Hair'

thats what I call a good story ...was very impressed...

short but sweet... left me wanting more

Oh my Gosh!

I absolutely loved this line of thought. Please continue with more episodes. I don't know of anyone that this would not arouse...it did me..

Pardon me I need to go wake the wife before I go to work....

She will benefit from your work this morning.

The art of the short story is in the conservation of words. You have mastered the art. Very well done!

I loved this story just because of the unique, cute, sexy storyline. The sex scene was great but the characters were interesting.

may have been short but that story was totally there keep up the great stories

I would hope and pray there might be an additional two or three Chapters to this one. Anticipation ............

This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read! It tells a lot, but leaves open endless possibilities. I am eager to read any follow-on to this beautifully written work.

I hope this developes into something more...it certainly has the potential.

Very good - a real human story

if stephanie was such a doll, why did she go the escort service, if indeed she did?

you answer no questions in your story...of course the possibility of fornication with a daughter's female friend warrants at least some thought

did you explain why the father is (apparently) spouseless?

for that matter, did the escort service encounter involve no condoms or stuff like that?

your story had potential

One of the few I've voted on. The beauty of a pleasant fantasy such as this is to go with the flow of the fantasy and don't think about the possible questions. Thanks for writing and TIA for the next one(s). Phil

Very Very Good

I enjoyed that very much.............more please?

Loved this beginning of a story that I hope will be continued into many chapters.

Mack

Very concise and erotic. Well done!

Wonderful first submission to Lit. Hope to see more!!!

Jim

This was a terrific story well done. I hope to see more and perhaps a longer story. This could do well with a follow up. In itself its good at its length.

Well conceived and executed.

To all those who are insisting that this is not a sufficient story, lighten up. This is not a novel, but a short story that reports one incident in a lifetime.

I too would like to see more from this author, but if this is all there is from Stephie, then I am well satisfied.

...and well written, great theme! A unique twist, very enjoyable.

As a young woman married to an older man, I found this story very interesting and an arousing short. As just a reader, I found the story very well written with a hint of mystery. I agree with one of the other readers that said the story isn't a novel and others shouldn't get too wrapped up in the details like why is the father single and what about the no condoms rule and all that. Too many details (small details that, though missing, didn't detract from the story at all) would have ruined the mysterious and sexy encounter between the girl and the father. I enjoyed it very much and hopefully we can see more from these two!

And outstanding for a 1st submission

5 stars for you?