All Comments on 'The Snake and the Doe'

This isn't mind control. Domination, sure, but I think this story is miscategorized. Or is this going to be a series? With mind control later on, perhaps, or at least some explanation for him vamishing? Left as it is, his motive for leaving is unclear. It doesnt make enough sense for him to vanish just because he slept with her. If he was only using her, why would he disrupt his life so much? And what about his girlfriend from before, where did she go? Did I miss something there? Anyway, the story does a good job of showing her emotions and her naivete, that was well done. I think the end is a little abrupt and confusing though.