All Comments on 'Supernatural Earth Pt. 02'

I love lillith so glad your posting your stories again

I am giving you five stars but just wanted to say that you made an error. In vamiress, mine you said James' parents died in a car crash but his sister died in a mugging before that. In this you said all three died in an accident. As I said, wonderful story, just wanted to point out an error.

I thought that I had fixed this in this round of edits. Sorry about that.

It really is no problem. Didn't effect my enjoyment of the story at all. I know that whenever I make an error I like to know about it and fix it, if for no one else but myself. Still five stars.

That Lily had gotten pregnant after that first night with Daniel. Specifically, when she touched her abdomen while speaking to him evasively.

(To be fair, I'm well-versed in tropes.)

Thankfully, knowing that in advance didn't spoil anything, so I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks Cittran, that's good to know. I think that you're one of the few who had it figured out (at least out of those who have messaged me). I was afraid that I made it too obvious.

Still, glad you enjoyed it. :)

On a side question to you all: is this story really THAT good? I have 31 votes (as of this posting) and the story is maintaining a 5.0 rating. O.o

Yes alex it indeed is that good! I love it both this and vampiress mine both got 5 stars from me people really do enjoy this story i love it! Daniel kind of reminds me of myself in some ways stays to himself but always there to help which is me to the t i just hate being single like him i have been single for 14 years and i can't find anyone but oh well these stories are good enough for me

This and Vampires Mine are my favorite stories. Love them both. More of these characters please! 5* for sure!

Daniel and Lily will be making appearances in future stories as hinted by the teasers I put at the end of "Creature Below".

Seriously, this saga, and its two bretheren, are among the best writing I've seen on this site. I can not begin to describe my joy to see them returned.

I got to give it to you Alex, you write some good stories. This one and Creature Below are probably my two favorite that you've written. I've read both those more than once and they never fail to entertain me. Great job, and I'm still waiting for more stories from Creature...

please next chapter

I am hoping for more, as I belive you are literate in the art of memes. Please write soon.

So curious! Is she a snow maiden like her mother? Or is that title earned? How fast do they grow? Is she still a toddler or is she an adult now? So many questions!

Great story telling! I get so immersed and love how all the characters are still included!

I love this! Adventure, battle, love, and honor! I'm off to read part two!

A wonderful twist to end the story

Not going to lie.... I like this mc more than the previous one :) He is just such a badass!! Incredible story!! Can’t wait to continue the series

BITCH!!!!! All this fucking time (still have no idea how much time it has actually been because of the time distortion bullshit...) and she never tells me I'm father... WTF?

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Awesome series so far!

11/10!!!!!

I'm loving this series so far as it's got a story line and not just sex