All Comments on 'The Snow Storm'

Story lame.

fairy tale. pretty shallow

The basic idea is good, but the whole thing needs to be expanded, fleshed out,no pun intended. Take your time telling the story.

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

Telling stories in this "speaking to the other person" mode is just so off-putting

Your story-telling skills are captivating....mmmm

I didn't see any, two stars at most.