Nice! I enjoyed the wintery setting. It even made me a little chilly. Pretty good pacing, good tease factor. Great job, I also enjoy the bare look. Thank you.
I'm an old guy. I've been through a lot and I am proud to say I lived through it all and even grew from the experience. I mostly write about my past. I don't consider it to be fiction - but some of this stuff goes back 50 years or more and so it might be the tale is an inco...