All Comments on 'The Society'

Pulled me right into the story. Sounds like this story is going to get better as it progresses along. Thanks for the story, waiting now for the next stage.

but something is missing here - for me at least. Some passages read like an accountant's report about the last board meeting. So you should spice it up a little; not the sex - there's quite enough of that - , but the description of it.

I really hope you are planning a series of these stories. Excellent set up for a nice cycle. I disagree with the reader who says the story needs to be "spiced up"

Very talented writing; good imagery and very hot. Reminds me of our 1st visit to The Mansion, somewhat similar, private but not as exlusive while just as HOT. The anticipation and buildup proved well worth the wait. I personally liked the change of pace from many other selections in your library but the ending leaves the door open to introduction of every variation your imagination is more than capable of putting into print. Please … more, More, MORE … inside the “Society” as Martins see’s it.

Nice, neat, clean, well written. Where's the next chapter? Please.

We loved it. Nice, clean, well written and powerful. My boyfriend and I have been waiting for the next chapter. Please, write and publish it.

What a great story - hot, sexually charged without being vulgar - please write about the next stage

I wish you had continued this.

i wish this had been continued. it would have been fun to go thru the whole initiation process.

One of the best sex stories! We need more in new story of that couple and invited new couples friends !

I must echo the thoughts of those preceding me in that I wish this very erotic story was continued. Would love to know what the additional initiation events were.