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AmandaSilverAmandaSilverover 13 years ago
Great job!

You did a great job leading the reader to assume she was a werewolf, but it was a total surprise when he turned out to be one. It would have been nice to have some idea of what the painting was or even a title, but otherwise excellent.

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