All Comments on 'The Softball Team'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Spreading

S.T.D.s from the football gangbang, you and little perv hubbie are quite the pair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You both deserve each other.

A wimp cuck and a cumslut. A perfect marriage. Well done you two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I Can Relate

Hubby and I do things similar to this but I hope you have them tested like we do. It's all in good fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story

WOnderful

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
!!!!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Have Fun

If it's all safe and you both are willing, I don't see the problem

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please

get an editor/or proof your stories. And try another word other than "insane"

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You are probably some snot nosed punk...because

you have no idea what's involved...like you write ...Jack and Jill went up the hill and she sucked a bunch of other men and fucked them too...laa dee da...You sound like a teenager and since there is no way knowing on this site...I know...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lucky guys

The lucky guys were the ones that ate the pizza instead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Bad WAY bad

Put some thought into a story and get an editor as well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This is not...

...a story.It is a low self-esteem female wet dream.To the woman who does this with her hubby but practices some safe sex -Huh? What part of "I'm laughing at your slut pig even while I'm fucking her" gets you off???pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I. Q.

another author with an I.Q. of ten.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I. Q.

another author with an I.Q. of ten.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I. Q.

another author with an I.Q. of ten.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I. Q.

another author with an I.Q. of ten.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
and the jerk

who posts like this has an IQ even less

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Braindead is braindead

People do this crap sometimes up to two years before they get infected.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
M O R E

The story was excellent. I was ready to call the widow woman and really rip her open. when do we get part two? Hurry and don't leave us hanging5E77

ScarrharrScarrharrabout 8 years ago
Softball players

I ran a major slow pitch softball team for 7 years after moving up from a 15 years of running a class A team. My best hitter was always in demand but stayed with my team turning down a lot of cash over the years to do so. Everyone talked of how loyal he remained because we never paid money to any player but he was paid in a another way using my hot wife's pussy much more than the 2 wives he had during his playing days. His final 3 years he was promised pussy for life if he stayed on the team by my wife with her being true to the promise those last 3 years because he was between her long legs an average of 4 days a week the entire three years with him doing her almost every day of the week that last year since his wife was divorcing him after she found out. He retired after that year but fucked her 2 more years until he married a third time but if he ask for pussy today 15 years later he could get it because he was promised pussy for life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keeping Team Together

We could not match money with the big teams so we kept players on board using an awards system each weekend to give the winner a fun weekend in his motel room between games. The winner of this award won my wife as their sex slave the following weekend from 6pm Friday till noon the following Sunday. Each of our 13 players won the award once with 4 more receiving it multiply times during the 22 weekends of tournament play. My wife was offered as the reward for 3 sex filled summers and only 2 players out of the 18 total that played during our 3 year run. They gave her the nickname Team Pussy at the start of the second season

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

liked the story..hoped i was there..

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
One trick pony

You are a one trick pony as a writer. Not a very good trick either. Glad you quit.

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