All Comments on 'The Son Who Loved Me Pt. 02'

This was a shitty follow-up chapter. I really did not want to read about Uncle Phil.

It is a big mistake to let outsiders intrude in a mom-son story!

i think its neat she is fucking somebody else. im sic off reeding all these goody goody 2 shoes nice ending stories all the time

you were writing a beautiful love story between a wonderful mother and her sexy son but then you went off the rails hon. :-((

Nothing and nobody should ever come between a boy's hard young cock and his mother warm wet cunt. For fuck's sake--he's her own son, he came out of that cunt. How could anyone else have the right to go back up that wonderful hole between her legs, anyone besides her own darling boy? For any boy, his mother's cunt has several functions. It's his own birth canal, it's the welcoming sheathe for his young cock, and it's the receptacle nature provides for all the creamy semen in his hot young balls. For anyone else cock and semen it's strictly off limits.

Do everyone a favor and never write again. You took a decent beginning and turned it into a peice of garbage that sounds like a Jerry Springer episode. Even a idiot can see the next chapter of an orgy of Phil Jan Donnie and the daughter which sounds like another peice of garbage and if that happens it would just make Jan a stupid whore for fucking the asshole who got her drunk just to fuck her and knock her up and poor Donnie would be left in love with a knocked up dumbass whore. No story with a gapping plot hole and no characters to connect with.

Think it's well-written. Finding that I don't care for the direction of the plot.