All Comments on 'The Song of Roland Ch. 09'

I look forward to each new chapter you post. The story is addictive and I really enjoy reading how these two are growing and developing as the story progresses. Great job!

Finally started the series today and enjoying it thoroughly! Hope it's going to be a long one.

Like the subject says, you mixed a metaphor in this chapter.

Clocking someone is the act of hitting them in the face, usually (but not always) with a fist.

Cold-cocking is the act of knocking someone unconscious in one shot, ysually as a surprise attack.

There is no such thing as cold-clocking.