All Comments on 'The Song of Roland Ch. 12'
by HookedonPhoenix
- 6 Comments
Anonymousover 7 years agoHi. Love the story. Look at the transition from page 1 to 2. A piece of a sentence or more is missing.
HookedonPhoenixover 7 years agoAuthorHey Anon! Just so you know regarding your comment. There isn't anything missing, it was just an odd transition for the page. The "-" that was put there was intended to show a sudden shift in action. Apologies for the confusion
jpz007ahrenover 7 years agoLove your characters, but I think the anon is right. The transition from page 1 to 2 did seem.. off? Anyways, i'm glad you had the succubus and not the soldier find them, I like this harpy.
Anonymousover 7 years agoKeep them coming. It would be lovely to see more anal action between Kelsea and Roland something really vivid.
Anonymousover 3 years agoRape is not my cup of tea. And make mistake that is what this is. Similarly the Kelsea is also a rapist, so much so she almost killed Roland.
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