All Comments on 'The Song of Roland Ch. 15'

Damn, missed your writing over the winter break. Fantastic as always.

It is a great story, with complex characters and nuanced relationships, but I have two issues. One, Roland needs to let the succubus know what the heck happened that made him the way he is. Two, never ever EVER use the word choad ever again. Pleeaase! I have no idea why, but it made my stomach heave. Lol

Thanks

... been waiting for this story continuation for a while, please make Kelsey be the girl in Rolands past, it would be so romantic ( only she doesn't remember) ... think about my love(r) and me when I read this.... <3

Love you for writing this the way you do... Can't wait for the next part and the next etc. :P

I have not beenough inspired to leave a comment to ANY other storyline on literotica. You have the touch! Never stop, ever!

You're an evil cruel writing fiend! Please post the next chapter before I go mad.

Right when it happened, I had many thoughts as to how they would get out of it. I came nowhere near close to what actually happened, nowhere near.

To those of you who have commented, both in this story and in the past: Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the positive feedback! I am beyond overjoyed that others have taken notice and had fun with this story as it meanders forward.

To answer a few questions/comments made in this section:

Anon asked if I was going to connect Kelsea to Calexi in some way within the story (ie make them the same person.) While the two are integral to understanding Roland's psyche they are for sure two different people, both of whom the tale will go into further detail as the story moves along.

As for a second anon comment asking that Roland explain what happened: the story will answer it in time, and there are large gaps of what has happened that has yet to be explained. Just keep in mind (if this chapter didn't show clearly enough) that Roland isn't the "sharing" type.

can't wait for the next chapter...

I just want to say thank you for the world and story you've crafted thus far - and kept sharing. I've been so happy to see new chapters and growth come about. There are many books on my shelves that do not spark the page turning feeling your story has in abundance.

I certainly hope you are having as much fun and satisfaction in writing the continuing adventure of Roland and Kelsea as everyone has been experiencing through reading it!

Again, thank you for sharing the story!

DAM IT Hookedon ! lol