by cymry
Thank you for a great story regarding the power of love. A wonderful ending!
A good story, thanks! I hope the somewhat mysterious ending is leaving an opening for the sequel. Keep it up!
I hated for it to end. I agree that there should be a sequel. Would love to hear more about Sara and her parents.
This story was wonderful. It had a combination of fantasy and romance. A winning combination as those two go hand in hand. I agree with some of the previous comments that there should be a sequal.
I always knew you were a fantastic writer, baby. You've captured my heart with this one as well. Ravenx
and thank you for a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great work. a fan in Texas
Loved the story - it showed sensitivity dealing with love
This Is Such A Lovely Story. The Erotic Parts Were Masterfuly Writen. I Loved How The Perspective Shifts Back And Forth. Very Effective. The Actual Plot Was Great Too. I Truely Feel That This Should Be Lengthened And Published As A Novel. I Think It Would Be Hugely Successful. Thanks For The Wonderful Read- Roz
hey keep up the writing the actaul story is really good i love it maybe there could be someone for that young girl
keep it up from a fellow writer
hey keep up the writing the actaul story is really good i love it maybe there could be someone for that young girl
keep it up from a fellow writer
Simply awesome.. Please keep going if have some continuing ideas for this story.. Would love to read more..
I loved every moment in your story! I hope to see more of your wonderful stories! Keep up the great work!
I absolutely loved this delectable series!!! I would love another separate one which includes Sara when she is older and perhaps facing a enemy of some kind!!! You are such a brilliant author!!! ... I don't normally post comments , but I just had to for your story!!! I am most satisfied with the ending!!!