All Comments on 'The Soul Worm'

Very nice story, tight and suspenseful. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Good luck in the contest!

That was wonderful, you've got my vote.

Pretty good, the thing is I would have preferred another chapter in "Succubus Summoning" to this. Still a good story.

This was nicely paced, sensual and horrific in equal measures. As ever your style is fluid and a pleasure to read. Best of luck in the competition.

very well written, a good mixture of horror and sex... good luck in the contest...

richly imaginative and wonderfully described. The way he loses his soul is just perfect, a slow-motion orgasm. A little gem of a story.

The beauty of his release and the horror that comes with it is truly scary. great story.

I think we should investigate this world more closely, more specifically, the spider-girl.

Your stories are always very well written and this one does not disappoint!

Many times, not certain that a story is truly worth my time, I will gloss over much of the beginning, but this little gem is worth a second and third read! I hope some of these 'hostile fauna' escape into the world at large!

To be honest, this "HELL-SPACE" world you created should be your next series. Most non-human, Sci-fi or erotic horrors are usually male dominant and to be honest.... boring. I find that your story lines are creatively written and are worth reading over. There are a handful of artists out there in your category that are actually consistently good, you are among the best of them. Though the SS series is enjoyable, I still would love to see more of this hell-space story you've created. Keep writing and consider finding a publisher.

Looking good but the overall story is rather short and it could be much more interesting if there was more history to the proceedings of the story.

Lots of adverbs, but lacking the adjectives that create images. Paint pictures with words. I want to see the movie in my mind.

Love your succubus stories, Many Eye Hydra. Hope to read and comment on all of them. I feel bad for Bill Willets... but at least he's at peace with his wife, Jo, now.

The second story - from the Freedom collection - was imo even more hot. Wow, loved how he went back and willingly let her finish him off, just wow :)

your stories are really great but so short :/