All Comments on 'The Souls of Wyrmkin Ch. 01'

Great story, update soon plz

Very interesting story plot. Unfortunately, a very awkward place to stop. I see that this story just got posted today so am hopeful you will continue the story. Thanks for the good read!!

I am currently working on Ch. 02 and I will be posting it as quickly as I can write and edit it. Thanks for the feedback, it’s very encouraging!

Please be one of the good ones and finish the story for us.

I've always consciously avoided these "unwilling dragon mate" stories before now, but I'll stick around and continue reading this one. I may even tag-search "dragon" and see if there are other stories equally good.

PS - Scales are creepy, so thanks for sparing us that.

Adored it! Please post more

It is unusual to find a dragon so lacking in wisdom. At whatever age, he still seems immature and selfish. I pity his Treasure and hope that she can mend and then give him hell.

Why did you have their names in capitals all the time. I thought maybe you changed POV but it is all 3rd person. You also had odd words like this as well. Confusing, could not finish.

Thanks for taking time to leave feedback on my story, Ultimate! I list the perspective changes by breaking sections with the name of the character because, while the action is written in third person, you’re only privy to the thoughts and inner dialogue of the character whose section it is. The “randomly” capitalized words are for emphasis, though I’ve noticed a few inconsistencies which probably make it confusing. Like Sense(s) is often capitalized to make it clear that it’s his dragon sense that I’m referring to. I’ll definitely keep this in mind if I publish an edit in the future.