by sandip
YOU WERE TO BUSY WATCHING COCK FOR YOURSELF.
This "story" isn't worthy of a comment. It is trash of the lowest degree.
Dude, you totally screwed up the story by putting Bengali interpretation in brackets after each line spoken (not that the story was anything great). That spoilt the whole essence. If you needed to put Bengali words, you should have written the full thing in Bengali and then put it in the non-english section!!
dear author,
forget all the ungrateful louts' comments and carry on with the plot. are dada bhai, ei golpo pore to amar dhon thatiye uthe bar bar. eto bar je batha korteche!!