by Terrafic
Hey you can't just leave a big cliff hanger like that...please continue
I am working on part two. It is coming a little slower than I wanted because of work and also because I have come down with a cold. But now worries, I will finish it.
You achieved in one chapter what we all strive for, grabbing the reader's attention. Now for the followup to quinch the thirst and provide relief! ;-)