All Comments on 'The Spoiled Victorian Bride Pt. 01'

by FrancisMarlowe

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Ellienora35Ellienora35over 7 years ago
Interesting

But where do you go from here?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

That was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Super hot

That was super hot. I love the idea of a man owning his wife and having the right to fuck her whenever he wants.

FrancisMarloweFrancisMarloweover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback.

This is my first submission here. I appreciate your feedback and am glad that some of you liked it. There is more to this story. I was going to post it in installments, but haven't decided yet.

ddraelynkharddraelynkharover 7 years ago
Please do post more, this was very enjoyable!

Loved it

cockcriticcockcriticover 7 years ago
sex

The brute needs a lesson in foreplay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great work!

This was amazing! Please please please post more from this story. I would love it if you could involve some anal, but whatever you post is fine as long as you continue this story! And whoever is offended by this story... it's just fantasy calm down lol

emerald79emerald79over 7 years ago
Fantastic!

I absolutely loved this, I need more. Hopefully you will post the rest of the story soon..... WellDone!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love it!!

Please add more chapters to this story! It is absolutely amazing :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The best

One of the best stories I have read. You are so talented please add more to this story as soon as possible!! Thanks!

FrancisMarloweFrancisMarloweover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the great feedback!

I am glad to know that some of you liked it. I just posted the second installment. It should be up soon!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 7 years ago
Liked it

Would have liked their characters a tad more developed though. But that lack of development didn't prevent me from enjoying your story.

Lainie666Lainie666over 7 years ago
Love it

Good job; I love that he never apologizes. Very hot.

FlukerFlukerabout 7 years ago
Best story I've read in a long time

Loved this, more please!! Beautiful writing, just my kind of fantasy, thank you for putting it into words :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Super hot

I'm female and this story is super hot. I love the dialogue.

thesebreasts95thesebreasts95over 4 years ago
I really liked this

Features some of my favourite things. I love historical stuff, and the breeding and humiliation make it a great read. Keep up the good work! :)

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