All Comments on 'The Stable Boy'

This one was fun. No excessive dialogue and back story, just old-school romance-novel fun. A little florid, a little "purple prose" towards the end, maybe. But kudos for being fun. And using the word "crescendo".

When she lays her head against his chest, maybe she can trail her fingers through the black silky hair that grows there. Steve is the sexy stable guy and should have a bit of dark silky chest hair just for the licking! Let her stroke it and taste it!