by AvayaNox
such a pretty story... i dont know what to say, it is just so beautiful...
I was so involved in the story I was sorry when it ended. A great piece of writing
This is just AWESOME it is really fresh and soemthing new to not only read but think about!! What a world you are well on your way to creating! PLEASE keep writing!
Are you going to finish this story? I'm interested to see how Ferdinand keeps his promise
a beautiful story narrated in a wonderful way. among my very favorites.