All Comments on 'The Stall To My Right'

find myself seduced in

...about not having found a bathroom that is suitable to be seduced in, try leaving your trailer park every now and then. Upscale buildings and establishments can have surreal bathrooms, not far from what you might expect to find on The Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous.

The story was WELL-WRITTEN, but left a bit to be desired.

This is one the most original stories I have read on Lit. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Please write a continuation with the two women together in a stall. This I eagely await. More please. Good job.

very well written and a great story too. Loved it.

You're building it nicely. Where do we go from here?

really alive totally involved - love it

Great short story. Very erotic!