All Comments on 'The Stand-In Girlfriend Ch. 03-06'

This is more than just entertaining, actually. It requires some suspension of disbelief, but with that it's unusually engrossing. I see a few minor things here and there that need editing, but I'm finding this all in all to be an exceptionally engaging and enjoyable story. Bring on the rest, mspat.

Five.

Story you've written. I know I have a new author to follow.

This was an amazing update. I love Ashton parents. I'm happy they know about plan. But anyway Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update!! I know this has nothing to do with this story but are you going to finish Zachary and Ciara?? ツ

does Katrina know she is fucking chev's brother?

I totally love this story. Eventhough I've already read it a couple times I still find it just as good as if I'm reading it for the first time. I just wish mspat would post the whole story. I already know whats going to happen next but it's still torture having to wait for updates.

I'm so happy that this story was updated fairly quickly. I enjoyed this installment. I love that Ashton's parents are aware of this ridiculous farce he's tried to pull off. I kind of like Ashton but I'm going to need to see more of his redeeming qualities. Looking forward to the next installment.

This story had me laughing and so glad the update was long. omg! Maurice is Chev brother?! I love the way Kat and Ash thought they were playing Kat, and then Ash and Chev thought they were playing the parents, but the parents are actually playing Chev and Ash. The coup would be if Chev was playing them all and using her brother to do it, in order to get Ash.

When Katrina misdeeds see the light of day it going to be comical. Her pseudo-bigotry dose not extend to sexing a Black man. I wonder what Chev's best friend going to react??? I am so look forward to the update.

Chevonne knocked some sense back into his head!! I hollered when I read that, Chevonne ain't no punk! Maurice you sad sack, cheating on your girl-friend who happens to be Chevonne's best friend. How stupid are you, Maurice? I can't wait for Katrina's humiliation, I want Ashton to dump her since neither of them are in love with each other. Katrina only loves herself!!! Good stuff mspat!!

Waiting for the next installment ! Can't wait ..but what about Zachary &Ciara?

If I could give this story more than five stars I would I love the whole storyline please post more when possible..

also, do we get a ending to Malcom and Sabella, and Zack and Ciara

-CUMONMI

I had to read this chapters again. When will you be finishing Malcolm and Sabella's story? I love that story 2!!!

His parents are a hoot and much smarter than him. They won't know what hit them.

5*

I think you're a great writer, but some things that could be changed to improve the story

1. grammar mistakes that i've seen several times (it's supposed to, not suppose to; it's find a way not find away)

2. it's getting predictable: the parents and spencer know, kat is fucking martin, martin is chevonne's brother etc. it would've been nice to find out about those things later on. plus we know what characters are thinking at all times so there's no suspense.

Wait Martin is Chevonne's brother?

I can't wait to see the shit hit the fan over Martin and Katrina! DAYYYAAAMMMMNNN! Sweet story so far. I can't wait for the next part! :3

I love this story!!! please update soon :)

This is a great story. I love the concept of the stand in girlfriend. I cannot wait until the next installments

I can't wait for the next installment

Lol i love it hurrry with the next installment

Please post the rest of this story. I was hooked after the 3rd paragraph and obsessed by the end of Chapter 6. Great job!

Omw,loving this story! Please post more!

I have never read anything more childish in my life, the lack of editing goes along with that. 1*

I dont know if i can read anymore, if those two end up together the story would get -0 stars from me l. Shes just way to pathetic and all the mannerisms are annoying and to ficticious. Why she would even be attracted to a guy who would be with a girl like katrina is......stupid and ....pathetic. Let me guess all is forgiven in the end and they get married (gag).

omg when i found out his parents knew i screamed. this is so funny. keep it up n for thoses who thinks its childess get over ur self.

This is crackin me up. I love his parents they remind me of mine. I don't know why we all think our parents are dumb when they've already been there & done that. I also like Spencer & how does that idiot Katrina not know that she's screwing her roommates brother. Lawd. Keep it coming

Lol!! Ashton's parents are super cool and funny!! I actually thought Chevonne was going to give Eric a chance.

In love with all the characters so far! I actually laughed out loud. An when that happens its a good thing lol

This is soo good!! I love how smart the parents are for figuring everything out!!!